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చూపుల తూపులతో
నీ మది పై దాడి చేద్దామంటే
పువ్వులా నవ్వి నన్ను కరిగిస్తావు

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చిరునవ్వుల బాణం వేసి
నన్ను కట్టేస్తావు

చీకటి భూతాన్ని చూపించి
భయం గుప్పిట్లో నిన్ను పట్టెద్దామంటే
వెలుగు శిఖరల పై నిల్చుని పలకరిస్తావు

నేస్తం..............

లోకానికి నిన్ను చూపిద్దామంటే
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bagundhi anna.........
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[blue]nice post yaar ni kavitallo prasa kante bhavaniki pradhanyam vuntundi and itz beautiful keep it up
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